Author and
educator Brian Heinz has been a frequent speaker
at the Riverhead Middle School's annual Author in
Residence program. Last year, Mr. Heinz offered
the students at RMS his
workshop entitled, "The Book: From
Writer to
Reader". With the use of a
'road map' style mural board and dozens of visual
aids, Mr. Heinz explained to the students "how
a book becomes reality from raw idea to finished
product, and the many steps and people involved
in the process." This year, Mr. Henz presented
his workshop entitled, "The Opening Page".
"The Opening
Page" is a writing workshop, whereby Mr. Heinz
uses overhead transparencies, chart board examples,
readings, discussion, and brief exercises, to help
students learn to "artfully reveal the critical
elements of 'story' (character, setting or strong
sense of place, and the problem) on the opening
page."
His exercises and
examples focus on: use of sensory detail, four ways
to engage the reader, use of specific, concrete
words, an emphasis on writing utilizing "rich"
verbs and nouns, and concluding with the concept
of "Show! Don't Tell!" and the use of
figurative language forms.
"To sell the
idea of a book to a publisher you usually send them
about a six page overview of your book," explained
Mr. Heinz, "but it is the first sentence of
the first page that is the most important. If that
doesn't grab the person reading the
overview, it's all over." He went on to talk
about student writing and how important that first
noun followed by a verb that creates "a picture
in the reader's head" is in the writing process.
"It's great to
be able to bring an author like Mr. Heinz,"
explained RMS principal Andrea Pekar. "He very
quickly helps bring to life the importance of what
we teach all year long as part of the Six Traits
of Writing, our Language Arts and writing curriculum,
which emphasizes some of the same aspects of writing."
Photo caption:
Brian Heinz, author and educator, speaks to Riverhead
Middle School students about the importance of "The
Opening Page".